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is my poem good
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PostSubject: pain is never ending , my first poem   Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:57 am

Pain is never ending


Pain is never ending

My love, always sending

But no reply

Just another deny

Life is nothing but pain

I'm surprised I'm still sain

There's only one emotion for me that happens most of the time in life

And that's strife

But one person in life makes it all go away and i think you know who

You

Don't you see

Your the right girl for me

But you don't return the same feeling i have for you

But one day if you do

I will still love you

But for now

Pain is never ending

My love, always sending

But no reply

Just another deny





tell me what you think and thank you for reading this


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PostSubject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem   Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:06 am

Your suppose to set up a poll with it read the rulez plz but other then that its actually quiet alright.
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PostSubject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem   Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:58 pm

there sorry i didnt know how to set up a poll next time thanks for telling me
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PostSubject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem   Sat Sep 08, 2007 6:15 pm

Well thats ok its not that important anyways
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