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PostSubject: Poetry By Xadow Cusiake: No Title   Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:45 am


As i walked home that night from the office there was a faint smell of rain in the air reminds me of the saints that died long ago to bring us to this rare world of ours as i continued walking i remember hearing a loud bang followed by squeling tires kind of like when a person is slain i started to think what if it was a gun shot and a soul parting this world a but what if it was me to be destined as fate would have it i stoped back at the office out of force of habit my foot steps loud with a sudden silence then it was broken by sirens i ran as far as i could an then fell back heart broken for it had been my wife who was shot down by 2 an then as quick as it happened was as quick a they flu i jus sat there an watched my wife crying in pain nothing i could do then the rain had part in shatter as i'm on my knees waiting for the sun liked it matered it could of; should of been me lying on the ground with cries of distort waiting for my date with him the truely evil of grims but nothing i could do would bring her back to me there was nothing i could do but listen to her soft whispers of her last words saying "I Love You" but i had no reply for i felt to bad an too sad mintues flew like seconds an before long she was dead as i let out a yelp of pure anger an rage i then let down crying in daise.
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry By Xadow Cusiake: No Title   Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:13 pm

Very good cracker but you should have a tittle. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry By Xadow Cusiake: No Title   Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:33 pm

yes this is very good, you are very good with describeing how you feel and the sight within your mind as you write
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PostSubject: Re: Poetry By Xadow Cusiake: No Title   Sat Sep 08, 2007 6:19 pm

thank you i have been writeing poetry for many years now same as with joe we started bout damn near the same time with it
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PostSubject: Short Poetry:   Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:45 pm

The Lonely Death
On my way back from the continent,
thou be my love to show me thoust way,
through thy dearest hell, and thy crimson heaven,
to bear the sounds of broken bells, and thy 7 hearts
that cries blood tears thus running through my veins,
i shall always know it was all in vain; as the rope takes
my breath; as people called it my lonely death.


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PostSubject: Short Poetry:   Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:48 pm

How The Wind Cries

As the wind blows you can hear its secrets,
while its still whispers with the faint smell of
bold blood; instead of sweet water as it should.


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PostSubject: Short Poetry:   Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:52 pm

Silent Screams
The silence in the field is a sign of all truth;
for a little scream could be heard from the ghost
of those hell submited; as he singed his soul for he
was commited, and for the devil to take his body, and
leave it dead, cold, and sleam, and he became the new
silent scream.
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PostSubject: Short poetry:   Fri Sep 14, 2007 1:57 pm

The Waiting

The waiting list of the once known grim,
now streches on beyound the grave, and those
who sin come first; an stilll are brave; as vampyric
cries are boundby their thirst for the reched blood, and
their thirst of savaging for the so forth the waiting.
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PostSubject: Short Poetry:   Fri Sep 14, 2007 2:01 pm

A Red December

The day i arose from my chambersto see
of a sweet red december; i brought myself
to a cold thought of all those dead of blood
red snow, and form body an limb of all i know;
what you see is of all those who died, but, yet
i shall never of cried, and then i remembered it
was a red december.
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PostSubject: Not poetry   Fri Sep 14, 2007 2:01 pm

Its not the best to my ability but its my offer since no one else will post any more poems except joe
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