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| | pain is never ending , my first poem | |
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sinister vampire ninja
Posts : 210 Join date : 2007-09-03 Age : 30
| Subject: pain is never ending , my first poem Tue Sep 04, 2007 5:57 am | |
| Pain is never ending
Pain is never ending
My love, always sending
But no reply
Just another deny
Life is nothing but pain
I'm surprised I'm still sain
There's only one emotion for me that happens most of the time in life
And that's strife
But one person in life makes it all go away and i think you know who
You
Don't you see
Your the right girl for me
But you don't return the same feeling i have for you
But one day if you do
I will still love you
But for now
Pain is never ending
My love, always sending
But no reply
Just another deny
tell me what you think and thank you for reading this
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| | | Xadow Admin
Posts : 260 Join date : 2007-08-06
| Subject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem Tue Sep 04, 2007 10:06 am | |
| Your suppose to set up a poll with it read the rulez plz but other then that its actually quiet alright. | |
| | | sinister vampire ninja
Posts : 210 Join date : 2007-09-03 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem Tue Sep 04, 2007 3:58 pm | |
| there sorry i didnt know how to set up a poll next time thanks for telling me | |
| | | Xadow Admin
Posts : 260 Join date : 2007-08-06
| Subject: Re: pain is never ending , my first poem Sat Sep 08, 2007 6:15 pm | |
| Well thats ok its not that important anyways | |
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